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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-02 03:33 PM


If you want a glimpse into my soul,
read the words that I write.
See what's going on inside of my head,
through every day and each night.

When you have finished reading my words,
tell me- what is it that you see?
Do you see the meaning behind the words
of the poet that lies within  me?

Have you seen inside of my heart,
shared my struggles, and fears?
Have you silently wept with me
as my words have shown you my tears?

If you have ever read my words
Did I make you see?
Did you see this person I am-
this poet that I call me?


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-02-2001).]

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Auguste
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By the sea
1 posted 2001-10-02 05:08 PM


I must say that I like what I've seen.    Very nice work here!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-10-02 09:40 PM


And a lovely glimpse into your soul you do give us with your poems. Nice write

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-11-06 05:44 PM



Methinks not enough have seen this little treasure....

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-11-06 06:28 PM


We see and we appreciate you sharing it with us.  Well done, GS.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2001-11-06 06:37 PM


Well done. A little gem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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