Open Poetry #16 |
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Silent Truth |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
...When Eyes Meet Eyes If you were to meet me would you be colorblind to my eyes? Would you notice the shades of you that reflect while I am watching you watch me? I wonder if you really know the rhythm of my heart, why it beats a faster pace when you come into view, why it stalls when you look at me that way, how yours hold a magic in them that controls my desire. For you only, do my eyes speak truth. No words, just silent truth when eyes meet eyes. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When your eyes meet mine a rainbow will connect them we see each other ~*~ my heart must learn yours then the rhythm will be matched given the moment |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When your eyes meet mine a rainbow will connect them we see each other ~*~ my heart must learn yours then the rhythm will be matched given the moment ~*~ and I shall disperse my warmth in iridescent bliss showering you in the wynter of me ~*~ "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Keep this going you two, this is fabulous! Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey you *s...thanks..just a way to perk up a day hugssss K |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nakd Thoughts, very nice indeed! Enjoyed it. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Loved it. You two should collaborate and add to this. It would be wonderful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Wynter...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
One of those I wish I had written, from you, again. Touched me special, my friend. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Wynter, Beautiful. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wow...I love this. Great image of love. For you only, do my eyes speak truth. No words, just silent truth when eyes meet eyes. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Marie *s Donna, I am not good at collaborating, was just having some fun adding to his remarks. *s thank you JamesM...Glad you enjoy my words ~smiles to you. jwesley...I am sure you have written similar if not better ...thank you for the compliment. hugs Sy, I can just picture the word beautiful coming from your lips..thank you Duncan..another Wow...*s glad I could please you with my words, thank you again. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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