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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-01 10:31 PM


A Girl So Beautiful
By: Noah Eaton
8/28/01

I dream of a girl so beautiful
With amber hair waving in the wind
I see her open blue eyes twinkling like crystals
Wearing bright scarlet lipstick

She always smiles when I see her
She says she loves horses and birds
She tells me she loves fruits and the mountains
She sings with the most beautiful voice I've ever heard

She says she loves flowers
Especially lilacs and roses and lilies
She says she is sensitive, a dreamer, and kind of shy
But she loves to have fun when she can and dance and be merry

She says she's sad and cries when she's all alone
But she feels heavenly when she feels special and appreciated
And I fall in love with her all over again every time
When I see her cheer in delight when she feels complimented

And she says most of all
That she loves me most of all
I cry every time I hear her say these words
Whispering her hearts desires in my ear and into her arms I fall

I dream of a girl so beautiful
Her love makes me feel like the happiest boy of all time
Every morning I dream to see this is only a dream
But knowing it feels so real, I know this can really happen, a love so divine...

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-01 10:55 PM


Noah, A poem SO BEAUTIFUL!! Be patient my dear..she will come to you when you least expect it! Best wishes

Love,
RosePetal

Domzi
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2 posted 2001-10-02 02:55 AM


Don't worry, your DREAMgirl is on her way...making your visions a reality.
Such a sweet poem!

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3 posted 2001-11-03 09:40 PM


Noah,
Dream, dream of this EVERYDAY, and finally you'll see this dream come true!!! ^.^ And hope this day would come very soon for you...

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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:52 PM


You know what Noah? This dream will come true one day. I'm sure of it. It is a beautiful dream indeed

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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5 posted 2001-11-04 04:13 AM


Enjoyed this Noah....James
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6 posted 2001-11-04 08:47 AM


It will happen, Noah, and when it does you never know, she may have black hair..
Love this, your sweet heart is shining through.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-11-04 10:20 AM


Sometimes, dreams are more real than reality, for where the focus is applied, the vision appears.  

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

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8 posted 2001-11-04 10:22 AM


Hold onto your dream for one day it will come true.Great writing.
Peaches

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