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Open Poetry #16

When Tears Need To Flow

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-01 07:58 PM

When Tears Need To Flow

I saw in blurry eyes
The pain of yesterday
A moment when time stopped
The memory of times passed

In the tears that flowed
I saw hatred, I saw love
A need to be heard
Voice calling, voice unheard
A little girl, sat alone
Feeling betrayed
Feeling hurt

I heard her voice
On a spring morning
I asked she tell me all
She spoke freely, so real
When tears need to flow
A listener can end the sorrow

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

[This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 10-01-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-01 08:07 PM

How very true. At times we all need a shoulder to cry on and a friend in need......
Well done, enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-10-01 08:08 PM

OHHH DANIEL!! I absolutely love this poem!

"When tears need to flow
A listener can end the sorrow"

So true!! I must put this poem in my personal library : ) thanks for the great read!

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-10-01 08:09 PM

: ) ((Hugs))

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-01 10:13 PM

How lovely.

When tears need to flow
A listener can end the sorrow

How true. We all need a listener when we hurt.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-10-04 06:38 AM

JD~

This is so touching~

'The pain of yesterday
A moment when time stopped'

Just sooooooo touching~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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