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Open Poetry #16

When it is forever....

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-10-01 05:31 PM

upon the wind their song was sung
words once spoken by native tongue
their quest still sought beyond the grave
plains still trod by hearts yet brave

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-10-01 05:35 PM

A short one! Makes a big statement.

Warm smiles, Marie

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-10-01 05:38 PM

As ever was, Lady, as ever was, nice perspective here...very gentle smile

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-01 05:48 PM

I don't have the passion you and Marge have for the early pioneers and/or Native Americans, but I do have a passion for good poetry and this qualifies, indeed!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-10-01 06:27 PM

Good thoughts, enjoyed.
Sandra

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

5 posted 2001-10-01 06:39 PM

enjoy

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-10-04 06:31 AM

LadyInWhite~

'upon the wind their song was sung
words once spoken by native tongue
their quest still sought beyond the grave
plains still trod by hearts yet brave'

In it's entirety~ a spiritual beauty~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

7 posted 2001-10-04 09:00 AM

I enjoyed this for it's simplicity and emotion!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-10-04 09:07 AM

Well done my Lady. *L*

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2001-10-04 09:27 AM

Yes indeedy.. Brave hearts still walk among us... Nicely done, Lady..

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2001-10-04 09:31 AM

Very good. I like this.

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

11 posted 2001-10-04 10:16 AM

beautiful.

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