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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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0 posted 2001-10-01 04:34 PM

Ah sire, 'tis true, a love, if found, if found,
surely as the circle comes round to round
and if fate be fate, then surely we
would find truth, in love, as in poetry...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-10-01 04:40 PM

I wanna be able to do that!!! This is fantastic! I wish I could do it like you.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-10-01 04:41 PM

Ahh Lady, once more your few words speak volumes. For love should be truth and fates do still dictate to ones who seek the truths..nice write..very gentle smile

Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

3 posted 2001-10-01 04:41 PM

cool poem, short and sweet, just like this reply. =)

joe

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-01 04:46 PM

This is quite lovely...romantic, and tender.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-10-01 04:52 PM

very nicely said... but truth lies not in poetry but the heart...

very good.... I enjoyed!

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-10-01 05:40 PM

Assuredly when love be found, is found
like yon, gay flower 'twill grow and abound.
If destiny be destiny, you see,
thy love and mine are found in poetry.

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

7 posted 2001-10-01 05:43 PM

There is such beauty in short poems, I am finding out! Very nice one, much enjoyed.

~Marie~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-10-01 06:47 PM

enjoy

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2001-10-01 07:33 PM

This is a lovely little poem packed with a wonderful point!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-01 07:41 PM

indeed we would. . . as we always should. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-10-01 09:51 PM

LadyInWhite~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Balladeer

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12 posted 2001-10-01 09:58 PM

Truth can be found everywhere...in life as well as poetry...but one must look carefully.

Nicely said....

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-10-01 10:03 PM

I think there is truth in love. Haven't found it yet, but I'm sure it's out there.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

14 posted 2001-10-01 11:22 PM

Well said, Lady!

I love this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

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Tennessee

15 posted 2001-10-03 08:57 PM

This feels so good when you say it out loud and when you think it across your thoughts. Very beautiful!

Sincerely,
Regina

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2001-10-03 09:41 PM

A perfect circle!

cor

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