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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-01 08:29 AM


So many mistakes she has made
Too many times she has paid
She lives with so much solitude
And with her he is always rude

She moved so far away from home
Now the streets she does roam
She has no friends or family
Her life is full of negativity

Life is filled with loneliness
And so much more craziness
Sometimes she wishes she'd die
Then maybe he would cry

But, it would be too late
Cause then she'd escape
© By Sue 9/2/01  


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
sunshinemist
Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
1 posted 2001-10-01 09:04 AM


Sue, A very sad poem, Thank you for sharing, and I am very glad to meet you. Marie
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Member Seraphic
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with you
2 posted 2001-10-01 09:17 AM


sounds to me like he is the one making the mistakes. Take care of you,   hugs, SEA
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-10-01 09:23 AM


Smartchick,
This doesn't sound so smart. Sad subject good write.

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
4 posted 2001-10-01 06:53 PM


welcome my dear
i know only to well that you cant write this sort of thing unless you have felt it
they are not acedemic exercises
arthur

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