Open Poetry #16 |
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Absolute Instability |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion ![]() |
Absolute Instability The barometer for simplicity is far removed from excellence, changes are coming - like bad winds blowing in from badlands, with an immediacy set to hijack all we accept as true. Our bellwether grows uncertain, weathered from the bow-echo of thunder; no one knows where the next typhoon will emanate, and visibility is poor. Sandstorms to Tornadoes - from Kabul to Austin, with enough vorticity to rain the earth with evil's spunk; when the human dust settles, neither God will be pleased. © 2001 Corinne Bailey All Rights Reserved [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 09-19-2001).] |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
I was pleased to read this, for the message it carried and the excellent ending lines: "When the human dust settles, neither God will be pleased." |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Corinne~ You've done this with such deep conviction~ 'with enough vorticity to rain the earth with evil's spunk; when the human dust settles, neither God will be pleased.' I just have to give it an AMEN ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your words ring true, Corinne. Our futures are absolutely unstable. It's a frightening thought indeed. Thank you for your wise insight.. ![]() |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Topheth, Marge (hugs back, lady!) and Nan. Cor |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Corinne- Ah yes...much truth in this, my friend. Well said! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe the real God is already mad...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well spoken Corinne!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How very very true. Neither God will be pleased. Well expressed |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for commenting, Vicky, James, Enchantress and Tracey. Corinne |
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