You ( I'm tired of writing sad ones)

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Alan
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since 2000-09-12

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right next door

0 posted 2001-09-30 11:41 PM

YOU

With a love so fine
Like an old bottle of wine
That just gets better with each passing day

You come to me in my dreams
Like a slow flowing stream
You are so real

We walk along the golden coast
I have been diagnosed
I am helplessly and hopelessly in love with you

You the center of my universe, you are the reason I survive
My world you saved, my life you revived
You are my macrocosm

© alan

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03

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Tennessee

1 posted 2001-09-30 11:43 PM

This is so beautiful.

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

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right next door

2 posted 2001-09-30 11:47 PM

thanks Tenn. Angel...

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-10-01 12:12 PM

getting better with age
says the wise old sage *Wink *
along the flow
lit words with
golden glow
dreams land heart centre core
day after day , whispering encore !!
Hope
P.S thanks for those "eyes " they watch me daily

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-10-01 12:17 PM

Very pretty poem. I agree that it is time to try and focus on other things beside the sadness we are all feeling.

Betty Lou Hebert

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

5 posted 2001-10-01 08:57 AM

"We walk along the golden coast
I have been diagnosed
I am helplessly and hopelessly in love with you"

Alan, you do romantic beautifully

*SIGH *

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-01 09:00 AM

Alan, very nice indeed.

A great happy poem of love. Enjoyed it!

Marie

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-10-01 06:11 PM

I like the less sad Alan, this is wonderful.
Sandra

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-01 07:27 PM

Ah! This is more like it...positive, upbeat and all about love!! YES!!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

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Missouri

9 posted 2001-10-01 09:38 PM

Very romantic..I would melt if that had been written for me.

bonnie1961
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since 2001-09-30

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ny, usa

10 posted 2001-10-01 09:55 PM

i agree with songbird........ beautiful

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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11 posted 2001-10-01 10:02 PM

Last time I called a girl a macrocosm, I talked in a high voice for weeks!

Hope you have better luck...

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

12 posted 2001-10-01 10:19 PM

Balladeer...maybe you did not explain it to her right..next time try this...it means that she is " my everything of my anything"
you might not have the problem...thanks for reading

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-10-01 10:46 PM

Ah, no more Mr Icyheart!!!

I have been diagnosed
I am helplessly and hopelessly in love with you

What lovely words. And I'm so glad you explained macrocosm-saves me having to look it up-cause I lost my dictionary.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

14 posted 2001-10-01 10:53 PM

sorry Tracey...the icyheart shall be forever..somethings just don't melt...but I am glad you liked the poem...maybe I'll try another one..

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

15 posted 2001-10-01 11:01 PM

Alan, this is so lovely

The rhyme, sentiment and phrasing is wonderful!
I look forward to more romantic verse from you!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

16 posted 2001-10-01 11:17 PM

Thank you Melissa...

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

17 posted 2001-10-02 12:51 PM

Alan, I'm glad you decided to change your style even if it is only for a little while. Romantic looks good on you

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

18 posted 2001-10-02 08:41 AM

Anything amplified by macro design is a good thing, when it is written like this...well done, Alan!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2001-10-02 08:53 AM

Alan,
I had the same experience as Balladeer.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

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Calif.

20 posted 2001-10-02 11:49 AM

nice words .....

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

21 posted 2001-10-02 12:28 PM

it's good to read something like this from you..

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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