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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-09-30 10:35 PM

The soft sounds of summer leaves
That dance in the forest cathedral
Songs of birds never heard
Resound in the forest primeval

A place within this world untouched
Never seen by human eyes
A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs

Worldly is my everyday name
But my heart holds a passion true
Every day, every moment I live,
I live to love just you.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-09-30 10:39 PM

ahhh, geez, I am so glad you reposted, so it is there again for ones like me who never recieved those soft words the first time..thank you...very gentle smile

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-30 10:41 PM

I'm, glad yu reposted this too. It is very enchanting. Enjoyed so much!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Kit McCallum

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Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-09-30 10:43 PM

"A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs"

Your words flow as softly as a whisper Sharon ... just beautiful, very much enjoyed your sentiments in this lovely piece!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-30 10:58 PM

Ah, this lines just melted my heart, as I guess I need to hear these words...Where Angels wings are sighs. This was simply beautiful.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

5 posted 2001-10-10 09:30 AM

Took me to a forest, or perhaps a glen, wonderful feeling.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2001-10-10 10:14 AM

This is very good. I'm glad you reposted it. Cause, I didn't get to read it.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-10-10 10:33 AM

So soft and Beautiful PVD. Thank you for reposting. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-10-10 10:59 AM

enjoy

Denise

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9 posted 2001-10-10 08:09 PM

Very soft.....and lovely, Sharon! Beautiful!

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2001-10-10 09:14 PM

"Where angels wings are sighs"
My favorite line - Lovely, PdV..

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

11 posted 2001-10-10 09:33 PM

Beautiful writing
Especially like the second verse

very nice

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

12 posted 2001-10-11 07:13 AM

So glad you reposted it since I didn't get to see it the first time. Beautiful thoughts and beautiful piece of writing.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

13 posted 2001-10-11 07:16 AM

Ms DeVine - This is very nice. I didn't read it the first time through. We miss so much when we don't use the Search feature once in awhile.

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