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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-09-30 09:53 AM

I love him
more
than I
want
myself

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-09-30 10:20 AM

Cat,
I empathize with your poetry.

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

2 posted 2001-09-30 10:26 AM

so long as you don't love him more than he wants you...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2001-09-30 10:31 AM

Love all
No less
Than Self

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-09-30 12:38 PM

looks like you have laid down all your cards on him...

simple and direct...yet, this would hit some of us like a bang!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-09-30 12:42 PM

Very profound thought here Catalinamoon. Just my own personal thought, but I think we should love ourselves first in order to be able to give freely to another...lol...and I am rambling and not making much sense.
Take care of you, ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2001-09-30 12:57 PM

I love him
more
than I
want
myself
~~~~~~~~~~

If this is true
then all I can say is
Please be careful
Because ...
Ourselves, is all we truely have,
the rest is on loan

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

7 posted 2001-09-30 01:04 PM

very nice
Cindi

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-09-30 01:20 PM

Thanks everyone, for your comments. For the record, I know I do have to love myself before any one else can. This is just an expression of an overdose of love I feel for someone.
Sandra

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-09-30 01:53 PM

Love him if you may
and have his heart a way
in your own heart
and he'd surely stay

Lovely Sandra......I hope you don't mind me writing the above lines which your own lines inspired.....

Thank you dear.....
****************************

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-09-30 01:54 PM

love
yourself
as much
as you
love
him

and you'll never go wrong. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2001-09-30 02:06 PM

catalinamoon, overdosing on love is scary. Protecting your heart while giving it away is a delicate balancing act.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

12 posted 2001-09-30 02:10 PM

I see what you mean cause, I've been through this...just be careful cause, he may not love you the same....terrific poem!

Nathan

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2001-09-30 02:19 PM

Perfectly expressed in few words! Wow - Sandra this hits hard, this is exactly how I feel...too bad we learn the hard way that we have to love ourselves first (but, I'm still working on that one)

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2001-09-30 03:47 PM

I think I do this...James

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