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Open Poetry #16

Springtime storm

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-30 07:18 AM

I love the feel of springtime storm
Before the rain; when wind is warm
When clouds they gather up to meet
A time of rare; you just can’t beat

When raindrops then, they slowly fall
As dry earth beckons with its call
The scent of pleasure from the earth
What are times like this just worth?

I watch becalmed as tree limbs prance
As nature and her wind do dance
Then share a drop of nature’s wine
Amongst it all, on stage divine

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-30 08:15 AM

Rick~
This piece clearly dances with lively imagery~

'I watch becalmed as tree limbs prance
As nature and her wind do dance
Then share a drop of nature’s wine
Amongst it all, on stage divine'

Oh ... I like this so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-09-30 08:22 AM

the smell of warm, refreshed by tears...

this is wonderful, Rick!

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-09-30 09:33 AM

Beautiful words and expressions. I loved it.

Storms are great. Nice to meet you, Rick.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-09-30 09:55 AM

I know this exact moment, the smells in the air, the feel of awaiting the first drops. What a good job you did on it.
Sandra

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