Open Poetry #16 |
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In Rake Of Autumnal Angels |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
In Rake Of Autumnal Angels ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() Sorrow drips around us in shedding visions of recall Someday - somehow we will wish it from our fall Perhaps a future light of hope will shine But for now our hearts lay in sorrowing repine So sadly in remember the autumnal loss of this September No leaf has fallen unclaimed in the heart of brotherly remembrance~ Beyond the glow of autumnal sun we'll meet to rake angels, every one~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes you leave me without words, this being one of those times.... |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Marge, How well we all shall remember this fall. Thank you so much for sharing. ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You have a beautiful soul. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now is the time for grief. Yet even with the healing we will always have the remember of our saddest September. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I understand ... when I think the words are gone, they return in such deep mourning~ I'm just not ready or able to move beyond ... not yet~ SunshineMist~ Thank you for remembering~ Seymour~ Takes one to know one, my friend~ Denise~ I'm waiting and wanting the healing to begin~ **Arthur asked me to post this~ quote:And I thank you for the heartfelt beauty of your thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- There are no words to explain how deeply this touches...all I can say is...I know... "Sorrow drips around us in shedding visions of recall Someday - somehow we will wish it from our fall" "No leaf has fallen unclaimed in the heart of brotherly remembrance~" So true, my friend. We will remember each and every angel, and we will not cease to pray as the recovery efforts continue. LOVE YOU~ Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm so glad vicky found this one for me!!! This is beautiful and a touching analogy... This is now among my favorites from you... ![]() |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
This is so very touching to the heart!! Standing ovation... |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Marge...yes we will remember the angels of this autumn forever..hugsss ~Victoria~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ We will always remember this fall....beautiful expression of your compassionate heart sweet friend. Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
In time my friend, in time! Wonderfully done. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I understand ... It will be a long time coming, but we will hold the memories forever~ Serenity~ Thank you for the reply~ TwilightMyst~ Thank you so much~ Victoria~ Remembering is about all we can do now~ But ... we must do it~ SmittenKitten~ Our hearts are full of confusion and compassion, dear one~ Thank you~ EagleOne~ I hope so dear friend~ God, I hope so~ Thank you for your hugs of understanding~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
marge - You have the soul of an angel, did you know that? I always get something out of your poems. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge "Beyond the glow of autumnal sun we'll meet to rake angels, every one" Yes, we will! |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
your words translate feelings from within...and you know how to touch hearts deeply with your words....thank you for sharing beautiful lady! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
No leaf has fallen unclaimed in the heart of brotherly remembrance~ Thank you for touching my heart today, dear lady. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marge ... have I told you how much I appreciate you my friend? You do have a beautiful soul my dear. Many hugs for this tender piece. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is an awesome painting of our reality. Thanks. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
It's all as raw as if it happened yesterday ... and it feels as if it will never heal~ ![]() |
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