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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-09-30 05:38 AM



In Rake Of Autumnal Angels

~*Marge Tindal*~

Sorrow drips around us
in shedding visions of recall
Someday - somehow
we will wish it from our fall

Perhaps a future light
of hope will shine
But for now our hearts lay
in sorrowing repine
So sadly in remember
the autumnal loss
of this September

No leaf has fallen unclaimed
in the heart of brotherly remembrance~


Beyond the glow of autumnal sun
we'll meet to rake angels,
every one~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-30-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-09-30 10:36 AM



Sometimes you leave me without words, this being one of those times....

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2 posted 2001-09-30 10:41 AM


Marge, How well we all shall remember this fall. Thank you so much for sharing.   ~Marie  Nice to meet you!  
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-09-30 10:45 AM


Marge,
You have a beautiful soul. *L*

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4 posted 2001-09-30 11:47 AM


Now is the time for grief. Yet even with the healing we will always have the remember of our saddest September.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-10-01 08:28 AM


Karilea~
I understand ... when I think the words are gone, they return in such deep mourning~
I'm just not ready or able to move beyond ... not yet~

SunshineMist~
Thank you for remembering~

Seymour~
Takes one to know one, my friend~

Denise~
I'm waiting and wanting the healing to begin~

**Arthur asked me to post this~

quote:
Dear marge
i have tried to post a reply to your latest poem but i cant
the system will not let me

So
here is what i wanted to say

So many so many
each a precious memory
happy memeory of what was
sad at what is no longer

As i sit here the leaves blow by my window
And i remember

thanks for sharing your gift
Arthur
And I thank you for the heartfelt beauty of your thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

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6 posted 2001-10-04 01:48 PM



Marge-
   There are no words to explain how deeply
   this touches...all I can say is...I know...

             "Sorrow drips around us
           in shedding visions of recall
               Someday - somehow
           we will wish it from our fall"

           "No leaf has fallen unclaimed
     in the heart of brotherly remembrance~"


   So true, my friend.  We will remember
   each and every angel, and we will not cease
   to pray as the recovery efforts continue.
   LOVE YOU~
   Hugs,  
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 2001-10-04 01:51 PM


I'm so glad vicky found this one for me!!!

This is beautiful and a touching analogy...

This is now among my favorites from you...


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8 posted 2001-10-04 01:55 PM




This is so very touching to the heart!!

Standing ovation...

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9 posted 2001-10-04 02:36 PM


beautifully written Marge...yes we will remember the angels of this autumn forever..hugsss

              ~Victoria~

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10 posted 2001-10-04 02:54 PM



Marge~  We will always remember this fall....beautiful expression of your compassionate heart sweet friend.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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11 posted 2001-10-05 06:21 AM


In time my friend, in time! Wonderfully done.

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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12 posted 2001-10-05 08:47 AM


Vicky~
I understand ...
It will be a long time coming, but we will hold the memories forever~

Serenity~
Thank you for the reply~

TwilightMyst~
Thank you so much~

Victoria~
Remembering is about all we can do now~
But ... we must do it~

SmittenKitten~
Our hearts are full of confusion and compassion, dear one~
Thank you~

EagleOne~
I hope so dear friend~
God, I hope so~
Thank you for your hugs of understanding~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

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13 posted 2001-10-05 01:38 PM


marge - You have the soul of an angel, did you know that?  I always get something out of your poems.
Martie
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14 posted 2001-10-05 02:42 PM


Marge

"Beyond the glow of autumnal sun
we'll meet to rake angels,
every one"

Yes, we will!  

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15 posted 2001-10-05 03:16 PM


your words translate feelings from within...and you know how to touch hearts deeply with your words....thank you for sharing beautiful lady!

((hugs))
Charisma

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16 posted 2001-10-05 03:24 PM


No leaf has fallen unclaimed
in the heart of brotherly remembrance~

Thank you for touching my heart today,
dear lady.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

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17 posted 2001-10-05 07:07 PM


Oh Marge ... have I told you how much I appreciate you my friend?  You do have a beautiful soul my dear. Many hugs for this tender piece.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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18 posted 2001-10-05 09:33 PM


This is an awesome painting of our reality. Thanks.
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2002-09-10 09:18 PM


It's all as raw as if it happened yesterday ...
and it feels as if it will never heal~


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