Open Poetry #16 |
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Canadian Geese |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Canadian Geese By: Noah Eaton 9/24/01 I honk with my siblings Leaving home in the north Flying the friendly skies Is my grand resort I spread my arms out wide And dive for the lake Skipping on the surface like a stone Wabbling in fields of dappled shade We hold family reunions in cypress swamps Before the frost blankets the grass Feasting on the leftovers of maize As the winter's coming in fast Next spring, I'll be going back home To celebrate the spring To you I share love this autumn's homecoming We are your kindred relatives, your Canadian Geese |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mistletoe Angel - an Angel you are to write so well about the Canadian Geese... BC |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
Very nice work. I never noticed Canada Geese before I fell in love with someone who points them out everytime she sees one. ![]() Now I don't have a choice! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
MistletoeAngel~ Are they leaving already?? I'll have to keep my eyes peeled...I love to see their graceful formation making it's way across the horizon. Lovely poem ![]() *Hugs* ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you KNOW this one loves me right? I watch them leaving and wonder if anyone cares about them as much as we do. The parks are so empty without them. Thank you for this one. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ Very nice~ I enjoyed this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mistletoe, Enjoyed |
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