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sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

0 posted 2001-09-29 06:37 PM

Sorrow

There is a place where many have traveled,
A place as dark as night,
Beneath the pits of a cold dark tomb,
Sorrow is caught in flight.

A loved one gone, a sad heart,
All alone and feeling blue,
Gone from us forevermore,
The one we loved so true.

A tender kiss, a warm embrace,
A farewell to the precious and few,
To the one in honor of his life,
The one we really knew.

Oh sorrow, when shall you leave,
This saddened heart of mine,
And give me back the peace I knew,
Carrying me away to a better time.

In moments of sadness and despair,
I reach out to touch the sky,
To give a kiss, a warm embrace,
To the one that said good-bye.

As I say that last farewell,
I truly know it in my heart,
There is a place that our loved ones go,
A place where we nevermore shall part.

Until that day we shall meet again,
For that kiss and warm embrace,
I shall carry you within my heart,
A tender resting place.

(c)2001Marie C.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-09-29 06:42 PM

Until that day we shall meet again,
For that kiss and warm embrace,
I shall carry you within my heart,
A tender resting place
.............
nice thoughts here ... a verse to dwell on
for sure

Welcome to Passions

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-09-29 06:43 PM

That was really nice Marie...so sad, but we will see them again. Well done.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-09-29 06:43 PM

Oh sorrow, when shall you leave,
This saddened heart of mine,
And give me back the peace I knew,
Carrying me away to a better time.

In moments of sadness and despair,
I reach out to touch the sky,
To give a kiss, a warm embrace,
To the one that said good-bye.

As I say that last farewell,
I truly know it in my heart,
There is a place that our loved ones go,
A place where we nevermore shall part.

Until that day we shall meet again,
For that kiss and warm embrace,
I shall carry you within my heart,
A tender resting place.
===================================

You make a wonderful poetic entrance with this cadence kissed bittersweet beauty...
very well done poetess...love your pen name.
Welcome to Poetry Land ...
its so nice to have you here with us

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-09-29 06:59 PM

This is very beautiful, and a lovely entrance to the 'circle of friends' who dwell here. Welcome to Passions!! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-09-29 07:05 PM

Rex, thank you very much. It is very nice to meet you.

Elizabeth, Thank you for your comments. Very nice to meet you and glad to be here.

Janet Marie, Thank you for your warm welcome. You have my name too! :-) Nice to meet you.

Warm smiles to all,
Sunshine mist

PS.I hope that I get the hang of this, trying to reply one at a time?? Is that possible?

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-09-29 07:08 PM

Enchantress,

Thank you kindly, and for the warm welcome to Passions. Nice to meet you!

Warm smiles,
Sunshinemist

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-29 07:12 PM

sunshinemist,

Very touching heartfelt tribute to someone you obviously loved very much. Nicely written.

Welcome to Passions!

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

8 posted 2001-09-29 07:15 PM

You did it right.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

9 posted 2001-09-29 07:38 PM

Lone Wolf, thank you so much for your comments. It is very nice to meet you too.

Sunshinemist

Elizabeth, thank you. I was hoping that I did it right!

Sunshinemist

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-09-29 09:43 PM

sunshinemist - sorrow I have known, as she was once my name. But now she is gone forever more, and peace has entered where she reined... Nicely written...

BC

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

11 posted 2001-09-29 09:49 PM

Sunshinemist,

Wow.. what an entrance. Very well written.. I cannot wait to see more

Welcome to Passions... you'll love it here

I need a darn quote. *chuckles*

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2001-09-30 04:15 AM

Hi Sunshinemist, a warm welcome to you and your beautiful poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-09-30 04:51 AM

SunshineMist~
Welcome to Passions, fellow Sunshine Stater~

Our losses are cumulative in this shed of autumn's splendor~

Thank you for sharing your thoughts~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2001-09-30 08:36 AM

Welcome to Passions! A most graceful entrance, we look forward to many more poetic verses from you! Please check your e-mail for a very special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

15 posted 2001-09-30 09:10 AM

Bill, thank you kindly.

Very nice to meet you.

Rosepetals, thank you so much and for your special comments.

Very nice to meet you.

Titia, Thank you kindly, and very nice to meet you.

Marge, Many thanks, very nice to meet you.

Sunshine, Thank you very much for your warm welcome, and that beautiful welcome card with my poem on it. I was delighted.

To all of you,,,,,My heart is singing.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

16 posted 2001-09-30 09:42 AM

Hi, welcome from me also. Such a sad poem, but filled with hope for a future life together. Very nice writing.
Sandra

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

17 posted 2001-09-30 09:49 AM

Sandra, thank you for your warm welcome and nice to meet you. Glad that you enjoyed my poem.

Marie

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

18 posted 2001-09-30 11:00 AM

Welcome SunshineMist!

this is such a tender entrance you have made....touching my heart too. I liked this very much

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

19 posted 2001-09-30 11:03 AM

Sea, Thank you kindly and for you sweet words. My heart shall sing a song today.

Nice to meet you,
~Marie

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

20 posted 2001-09-30 03:21 PM

Marie, welcome to this forum and long may you reign!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

21 posted 2001-09-30 03:26 PM

Welcome to passions, and and what a beautiful entrance you made here...looking forward for some more.

Charisma

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

22 posted 2001-09-30 03:53 PM

Salutations and a smile for a thoughtful poet and her expression. Memories are a guarantee to loved ones never truly being gone... As long as the mind remembers, the heart feels.

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

23 posted 2001-09-30 04:23 PM

What a beautiful first post sunshinemist ... Welcome to Passions! I hope to read more of your lovely work.

Best wishes,
/Kit

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

24 posted 2001-09-30 04:42 PM

this is very sad without being maudlin, you seem to have caught the mood exactly... well done!
Welcome to Passions!!
-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

25 posted 2001-09-30 05:28 PM

Irish Rose, thank you so much for your comments and warm welcome.

Very nice to meet you. ~Marie~

Charisma, Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for reading.

Very nice to meet you.

~Marie~

Mark, thank you very kindly, I am delighted to be here and nice to meet you too!

~Marie~

Kit, Thank you for the warm welcome and comments.

Nice to meet you!

~Marie~

Napalms constantly confused, Thank you ever so much for the comments and the warm welcome.

~Marie~

You are all very special and glad to be here! Warm smiles, and hugs friends.
Sunshinemist

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