Septembe-renga-itis... (by Munda & me)

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Nan

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0 posted 2001-09-29 03:49 PM

It's up to you perspicacious poets to figure out who did the first three lines in each stanza and who did the last two... (Yes - it's the same throughout)

Snowflake symphony
Enwrapped in nightly blanket
The sound of silence
Falling harmoniously
Upon earth's discord beneath

Moon over water
Reflection of firmament
A cleansing mirror
Catharsis for sunshine's ray
Thenceforth true enlightenment

The silence within
Universal awareness
Treasure found anew
Expressions of inner minds
To oneself truth must be told

Waft every crest upon your destined sea
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity
Nancy Ness

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-29-2001).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-09-29 03:59 PM

I know! I know!

Munda
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2 posted 2001-09-29 04:04 PM

ROFL! Now that's pretty obvious! It was such a pleasure to write with you Nan. Thanks.

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2001-09-29 09:02 PM

Two minds - one thought
It works
Flowed very well
Liz

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-09-29 09:12 PM

Nan - I have no idea who, whom, or whence one came out of the wherever to write this. Perhaps you, but it's very nice...

BC

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5 posted 2001-09-29 10:50 PM

Well it was simply a great number! But, I knew too - hah! Only because I read you all the time Nan. Munda you did a great job with the vocabulary queen! I really enjoyed this one.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

Denise

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6 posted 2001-09-30 11:58 AM

Beautifully done, you two! I'd say that Munda did the first three and you did the last two in each stanza. Am I right?

Kit McCallum

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7 posted 2001-09-30 06:17 PM

Wonderful collaboration ladies! I'm not good at guessing who did which lines ... so I'll simply let you know I enjoyed this immensely! Very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Daniel J D
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8 posted 2001-09-30 06:58 PM

Nan, well expressed, job well done.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-09-30 08:10 PM

Beautiful Nan and Munda.

I think Munda took the first three lines and Nan the last two.

Well could be the other way around, I don't really know

Titia

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Balladeer

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10 posted 2001-09-30 08:25 PM

Easy...Munda did the first three....Nan the last two.

(Nana always insists on getting in the last word!

)

Nan

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11 posted 2001-09-30 09:12 PM

Geesh - There's no fooling any of you...

I had a great time writing with you, Munda..

HEY MACK!!!... I DO NOT...!!!..

Marge Tindal

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12 posted 2001-10-01 09:12 AM

Munda and Nan~
A delightful twosome~
Wonderful form and teamship~

LOL @ Balladeer~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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13 posted 2001-10-01 09:17 AM

...and Nan always gets the last word in with such Class! [or is that "in class?"]

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2001-10-01 09:29 AM

Nan and Munda,
Sorry I missed this the first time around. I agree with Balladeer. A delightful colab.

Charisma

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15 posted 2001-10-01 09:57 AM

*wow* amazing teamwork.....

results in a fabulous Septemb-renga-itis...

love it!!!!

Charisma

Nan

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16 posted 2001-10-01 06:41 PM

Thanks my dear friends... Now what to do for the next workshop...

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