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Open Poetry #16

10 or less? Whew.

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-29 03:11 PM

"Office Space"

Briefly,
eyes
staring into
memories.

3:58 PM.

A smile
of you.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-29-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-29 03:18 PM

YOU are way too cool with these...
I have to practice up!
Good one Jeph.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-09-29 04:20 PM

My props to you, Topheth -- I bequeath you as the new "TWENTY OR LESS... Torch Holder." Now, run with it!

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-09-29 04:30 PM

This is great. I think you'd be very good at Japanes poetry as well.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-29 05:47 PM

melt

(now you know I have to try this too)

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-09-29 07:25 PM

Sigh, lovely work.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2001-09-30 03:22 AM

very good one! *boots back to top*

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-09-30 12:29 PM

you really do these very well...

i heaved a sigh of Awww.... and am waiting for more...

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