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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2001-09-29 11:45 AM

Watching vivid colors dance
  Upon the grey horizon's face
Leaving me somewhat in a trance
  The day's events for me to trace.
Red and gold-hued yellow merge
  As sunset's orange takes the field
And life's energy slowly fades from surge
  And to twilight the day yields.
Do not be troubled by coming night
  Do not your fears awaken.
There is nothing to cause fright
  Do not be scared or shaken.
With the coming of the darkness cold
  And as vision slowly compromises
I sing the statement loud and bold
  The sun, my dear, also rises!

[This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 09-29-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-09-29 11:52 AM

RSEvans,
Very pleasant read, enjoyed

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-09-29 11:58 AM

Very beautiful description of sunrise.. the photo is beautiful also. Thanks for your comment on my sunset poem.. it was inspired by a sunset two evenings also..that I had to face, driving west..I believe it was the brightest red I had ever seen so bright I could hardly see to drive.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-09-29 01:45 PM

Nice and uplifting, in these dark days. Beautiful pic, too.
Sandra

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

4 posted 2001-09-29 03:43 PM

Very nice! I enjoyed the picture as well.. *smiles softly*

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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

5 posted 2001-09-29 03:45 PM

Sey:  Thanks

Songbird:  Loved your poem as well

Sandra:  Thanks

NightShadow: *mwah*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-09-29 03:48 PM

Loved this and the pic blew me away! Beautiful! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-09-29 03:48 PM

Loved this and the pic blew me away! Beautiful! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-09-29 05:34 PM

Lovely pic and poem, RS. Well done!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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