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What Moon Is This ?
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What Moon Is This ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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What Moon Is This ? ~*Little Goose*~ ~What is this glowing up in the sky, that cavorts so high on brightest night Where comes this moon with such *gentle smile* so full of beguile driving a man to rhyme O' so very very divine ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a moon that's blessed with man's sweetness... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem and very well written. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Beats me, Goose, you are the moon expert. Remember? I lost the moon duel...grins...nice write, I will ponder on this mystery...very gentle smile with a hug and love for all you are, guardian |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Love the symbol of your words and the meaning of a moon-shaped heart which carries within it such a romantic vision of such a cold rock. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Beats me. Love and kisses |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this, perfect little moon poem  Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Now that's for sure !  SmartChick~ Why, I surely thank you~ Logan~  ~Words Lit with inspire glowing in the night fire gathered in sparks of desire fanning yet the fury of flames knowing the light that is shed will spread much love all over as lovers quill the words of the moonglow long in her song~ RSEvans~ It's sort of all in the perspective, isn't it? Thanks. Seymour~ LOL ! You glow~  CatalinaMoon~ Thanks, hon. We just can't resist the magnetism of the moon, can we ? *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Goodness and mercy hath the moon over you. I see it in ways...never before...through you. Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderful poem for a man with a very poetic and *gentle smile* Marge .... a tender tribute, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
We are A team, the Moon and I. The Smile that beguiles Comes from the gentle folk Admiring our glow which, In turn, causes us to Glow in sweet Response. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ Aww...how lovely I just *love* when the moon inspires you. Hugs and such, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Cute poem, I love the shape of it too, plus your words!! warm smiles, Marie |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge your beautiful smile shines with the moon........all over the world while it reach out to warm our hearts...... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ I love to share the spirit of the moon. Thank you~ Kit~ And when that *gentle smile* breaks into a 'Cheshire Cat' grin .. I love him even more~  LunaTic~ Well ... there you are~ I wondered when you'd phase~  Thank you for a wonderful reply. SmittenKitten~ And I give credit where credit is due ... Logan was my inspire ... *gently smiling* SunshineMist~ Thanks, glad to share~ Charisma~ Thank you, sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
nope, no rhyme for me not required in this form, see of lines, only three ~~~~~~~ inspirational moonglow always inspires me even words thereof ~*~ conversational my words to you under sun when light of day shines ~*~ conspiratory we whisper under the moon thoughts of love abound |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Loveliest whisper of moon in softest surround with wording of loving does so abound in the form of simply three to me from thee Thank you *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Hmmmmmm...I must have been sleeping through the rising of THIS moon. Loving it, and helping it 'rise' again. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, LittleBuddy~ Wouldn't ever want you to miss the poetic glow of moon~ Love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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