Open Poetry #16 |
Horizon's Seek |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Horizon’s Seek to know it has beat before this heart will surely go on that they have strolled long before these feet that yet search beyond sky’s blue is too familiar this green ground's been played before though light frames every window still, go open every door take nothing then for granted each gift a treasure adore to greet sunrise, then sunset should leave one with wanting more every bird’s trill greets an ear one’s vision would take in all stand quiet before the deer searching wind’s cool scent of fall too soon a midpoint passing as fall comes still soon does spring shore no fear of non-lasting winter shall quick summer bring leave in the path a footprint upon mountain come sands’ time then open every doorway to unearth your heart in mine |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to know it has beat before this heart will surely go on =================================== though light frames every window still, go open every door take nothing then for granted each gift a treasure adore to greet sunrise, then sunset should leave one with wanting more ====================================== leave in the path a footprint upon mountain come sands’ time then open every doorway to unearth your heart in mine ======================================== My oh my oh my ...... will ya look at that.... the sun just came up and colored my room in rays of wisdom gold...and how warm the day now is......... what a very very very cool poem.... Good morning Lady Sun.... you live up to thy name time ten in this poetic beauty. me We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sunshine~ What a lovely poem to wake up to There is a beautiful world out there and we should all enjoy. Great message expressed so nicely Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKarilea~ 'take nothing then for granted each gift a treasure adore to greet sunrise, then sunset should leave one with wanting more' Always ... always wanting more~ How precious is this write~ 'leave in the path a footprint upon mountain come sands’ time then open every doorway to unearth your heart in mine' *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* ~Hug~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really like this. Nicely done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
time passes. . . and the horizon still stands. . . a wonderful message my friend. . . well told. . .and beautifully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Oh this was incredible! Your wisdom, your words, touched my heart this morning. *s* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When I grow up I want to write just like you, oh SIGH.....this was so enlightening. What a sunrise from you this morning dear friend. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely poem. *L* |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Hi Sunshine, Very beautiful poem. Many messages are told within your words. Thank you for sharing. Warm smiles, Sunshinemist |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
to know it has beat before this heart will surely go on All things are easier, when we realize the pathway continues..very gentle smile..lovely write |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, this is just so wonderful! I now have a favourite by you! Gosh, I love this, into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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