Open Poetry #16 |
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Within A Dream |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Within A Dream I write of worlds I know not of where every day is continuous love yet, it is a place I see in sleep I have tucked away my dreams too deep what has caused this horrible mistake that I feel so empty when I’m awake so much is vanishing in this extreme can’t live a life within a dream |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SlickLady~ What a sad write...but so beautifully penned. May all your dreams come true! Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Live every day to the fullest, Helen. Don't take anything for granted. Life is what we make of it. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A retreat at a time of sorrow. Don't kick yourself. Your beauty is at hand. Just bring it to a sactuary out in the open until you are able to spread it more evenly throughout. Keep writing....you pen lovely awakenings. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that place exists within you. . . keep looking. . . well done. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I hope all of your dreams come true. A sad poem. But, very well written. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, There are any answers to this question. Find one that suits you. Nice write. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My heart goes out to you, Helen. May you find the peace your heart seeks. Sad, but powerful write. All writing comes |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Never give up dreaming. ![]() Warm smiles ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A sad write, but beautifully penned If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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