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Autumns' " wood-wind " Waltz
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Autumns' " wood-wind " Waltz |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
All shades of sunlight glisten as we glide 'gainst purest blue of infinite bright skys . Chill Autumn breeze caressed are leaves and branch by shifting waves of color now entranced , to soar , but for this timeless moment here , let cares receed until the path shines clear. Now , bouyed by currents swirling leaves have found fall up into the air , above the ground . Slow waltz within this bright hued floating cloud few moments such as these are we allowed so scarce indeed are lifes' such interludes that even now the music changes mood . All bow to wind our partner in this dance , for soon snow laden clouds start their advance . [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 09-28-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice imagery. "Slow waltz within this bright hued floating cloud few moments such as these are we allowed so scarce indeed are lifes' such interludes that even now the music changes mood" I enjoy those scarce moments. |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
I love the pictures you've painted here. Very beautiful. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Doc~ Thank you for that trip of beauty! Very refreshing  Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ I just love the word-play here~ 'bouyed by currents swirling leaves have found fall up into the air' All that imagery ... and a sonnet to boot~ VERY nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beautiful Autumn description, I just love this season Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Such a lovely Autumn Waltz. I love it! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Midnitesun , Thank you , of all of the seasons fall is my favorite . Perhaps because of the crisp air , and the promise of a cleansing winter/spring. Doc Sinister Handed , Thanks . This poem changed perspective somewhere along its' writing , at first I wrote it as I would see it , then changed to how it would be seen as a falling leaf. I'd hoped I be able to carry this off . Judging from the replies , it may have worked . Doc Smitten Kitten , Thanks . Three years of writing and the fascination has not dimmed in the slightest. I only wish I had started sooner . Doc Marge , Your words are high praise indeed . Sonnets are like water , in that they flow so naturally , with so little effort , that it's as if they write themselves . Doc Titia , Thank you dear class-mate . Me too . A chance to wrap things up , stow them away , and make ready for the coming new year . Doc Munda , Thanks . Dances with words . I'll save one for you anytime . Doc |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*sigh* This is breathtaking, Doc. Beautifully created! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Denise , Thanks , nothing quite like a beautiful fall day to float around . Glad you liked . Doc |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hey there Doc! Once again, you have offered an excellent read. Enjoyed the image and the flow... so back to the top you go. May the winds whisper passion's response and keep this autumn leaf above so much fallen snow (if you get my drift). Peace to you good Moose. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~ Slow waltz within this bright hued floating cloud few moments such as these are we allowed so scarce indeed are lifes' such interludes that even now the music changes mood . All bow to wind our partner in this dance , for soon snow laden clouds start their advance .~ Beautiful......just so beautifully done!!! Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL!! Makes me want to waltz through the fallen leaves.....it does! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is stunning imagery! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Drew , Ol' buddy , how the heck are ya ? Thanks for the R&R . Seems as though there was some question as to your whereabouts . I penned a possible answer to that but haven't had time to post it yet . I'll tack it on to your " Memorex " , with your permission of course . Doc Charisma , Thank you . Without question , Fall is my favorite time of year . I think that makes it easier to capture some of its' images with words . Doc Enchantress , Thanks , and by all means , dance away ! It's much easier than dancing in waist deep snow . Doc Lady Of Shallot , Thank you for your kind comments . Doc |
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