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Open Poetry #16

First date,1958 Themes

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-09-28 08:26 PM

Sweaty palms
Even with three showers
Meet her dad

Sitting there
In the cars back seat
Mother drives

Movie was bad
Arm on her seat back
Her nearness

At her door
You shake hands and smile
Date me again?

Back at school
Waiting for your bus
You see her

Being shy
You just grin at her
She knows

[This message has been edited by paladin (edited 09-28-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-09-28 08:43 PM

You know what, I can see this happening, though I was on the other side. Good job on this, very aptly described.
Sandra

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-09-28 08:48 PM

paladin--was that your mother or my mother? This sounds so familiar.

Much enjoyed!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-28 11:02 PM

Oh does this bring back memories!!! I could talk about the 50's and dating back then and the music for hours....but don't get me started. I well remember dates like this one!
Gee, think I almost gave my age away...lol.
Enjoyed!
~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-09-29 09:30 AM

A pleasant reminder of simpler times....

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