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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-09-28 12:24 PM

It doesn’t matter any more
What you called love
For you was a game, nothing more
You stole my heart
Into pieces it you tore
With an evil cackle
You threw it on the floor
But after today
It won’t matter any more
You never heard me as you walked away
As I told that there will come a day that you
Need me more than I need you
I’ll find someone, somewhere that really cares
Then with you I shall be done
Then you will want me to love you
But from my life you will be gone
You won’t matter anymore

© alan
09/27/01

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-09-28 12:27 PM

YES!! Go Alan, it's your birthday, shake your bootie!!

this is so good....I like that stick it to 'em feel.....yes, this is pretty darn good

yea for you!

"when I catch my breath, it's you I breathe" ~Michelle Branch~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-09-28 12:34 PM

Poetic justice?
or just poetic license?

Turn your back,
Walk away.
There really will be
A better day.
Just go outside
and look around,
there's lots of ladies
in your playground.

Wanna play in the snow?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-28 12:42 PM

thank you SEA...I am glad it made you smile..

Midnitesun..i get chilled easy.so I guess I'll have to skip the snow....thank you for reading it..

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-09-28 12:53 PM

You tell her Alan!

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-09-28 06:34 PM

I've written one similar to this, only I think I was trying to convince MYSELF...I like yours better, alan!

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2001-09-28 08:15 PM

Serenity..that is what I am doing..just trying to convince myself....and not doing a very good job of it...hope you did better
alan

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-09-28 08:18 PM

Alan, I think this is one of those stages we go through when someone hurts us, the I don't give a damn stage, when you really still do. But it's ok, each time we have to get through it however we can. Anyway, very expressive poem.
Sandra

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2001-09-29 12:51 PM

Yes there are those I have found
find your heart
then play around
What more can I say
I hate the games they play

Hugs to you anytime my friend Hope
P.S deleted at The Meadow , yet you left it here ???

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2001-09-29 01:03 AM

powerful write...helen

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-09-30 03:23 PM

just turn around and keep on walking and don't look back!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

11 posted 2001-09-30 05:02 PM

BOY, HAVE I BEEN THERE BEFORE! LOVED IT!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2001-09-30 05:35 PM

enjoy

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

13 posted 2001-09-30 05:36 PM

dont know what she's got til its gone..eh?

right there behind ya friend!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"all you need is someone you can hold..dont be sad, youre not alone..i will be here for you..." mwsmith

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2001-09-30 06:02 PM

Alan
This was wonderful and it showed that you are not one to be beaten by love but one who strives for something better that I'm sure you truly deserve. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2001-09-30 06:08 PM

Wonderful, positive sentiments Alan ... much enjoyed your enthusiasm and self-inspiration in this piece!

Best wishes,
/Kit

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

16 posted 2001-09-30 06:14 PM

I could almost hear Buddy Holly singing this one...

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX

http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

17 posted 2001-09-30 07:13 PM

Great expression, Alan. They never do seem to hear until it's too late, then the are all ears. It amazes me. Best of luck to you on your journey.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

18 posted 2001-09-30 08:03 PM

Alan, Love isn't always fair. Enjoyed this one! Nice to meet you also.

Warm smiles,
~Marie~

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

19 posted 2001-09-30 08:21 PM

Excellent writing, alan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

20 posted 2001-09-30 08:45 PM

Alan, this is an excellent write.
How far did you get before she called you back?
~warm hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

21 posted 2001-09-30 08:52 PM

nancy....totally gone...thank you for reading

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

22 posted 2001-09-30 11:07 PM

Pretty strong stuff here.

But from my life you will be gone
You won’t matter anymore

Very strong. I agree with SEA-way to stick it to her. By the way, is it your birthday? Happy birthday if it is. (or was a few days ago-I got here late

)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

23 posted 2001-09-30 11:19 PM

Tracey....thank you for replying..as for my birthday....I have no idea where she came up with that.....it is still 86 days away...

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