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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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it's a fleeting thought not yet caught by the web of rationality daily it escapes through the cracks this untenable hope that you will grab your coat and show up at my door Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oooooooh, this is goooooooood  I like this a lot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ 'it's a fleeting thought not yet caught' I enjoyed that~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your succinctity speaks volumes ... very cool poem Krista ... so much said with just the right words. well done poetess Smitten jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done. Who knows perhaps your wish will come true some day... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. It is really good. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SEA~  thank you! *hugs*Marge~ I'm glad you did that makes me smile. *hugs*JM~ I love your replies have I mentioned that before? Thank you poetess Janet  *hugs*Cpat Hair~ somewhere deep inside of me, I must believe that! Thank you for visiting By the way, did you know that if you took out the 'p' in your screen name, you would be "Cat Hair"? Hehe, just a little FYI.SmartChick~ why thank you it was nice of you to stop in.Hugs to all of you! Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
Very nice. Now... where did I leave my coat? Love you! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
awww, sweetie...if only it were that easy! love you   |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Krista- Enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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myslinky Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 27 |
Couldn't agree more... during break, while your driving, or just after reading a poem like this! Its great |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Smitten... cat hair would probably suit me better... have 5 of the critters and usually can find their hair on me somewhere..( laughing) at least it wasn't cat litter.... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
VickyChicky~ awww, you went digging!  Thanks for reading and replying and giving it another go myslinky~ Yes, a visit from your sweetheart is always a welcome thing! Cat Hair~ hehe, I know the feeling! I can't leave the door without getting some animal's furr on me  Hugs to all of you Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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