Open Poetry #16 |
On Whispers Of The Evening Wind |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* On Whispers Of The Evening Wind *~~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mysteria, These are the wind chimes I'm talking about. And they truly touch me THis is a deeply loving poem Very tender and from the heart Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where do angels go to die.... Oh Lord....that did me in. Crystalline, you are. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Then her name I will guess...Hope, with a middle name of Love...very gentle smile, very nice, glad to see the words come regardless |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...This is so very beautiful...you have the touch of what Logan said, hope and love, mixed in the ink you write with...and I am so glad to be able to read it. Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Elizabeth ~ Twas my little muse whispering, and she loves windchimes Sunshine ~ I wonder about that question too, and thank you for reading this one. Logan ~ You got it, but shhhhh, thank you for your love always. Martie ~ Thank you for helping me with a line in this one - I appreciated your help (I had a word in there no one would know and dear Martie helped me to change this a bit). |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Yes, Sharon...I know that voice, and yet, you have painted it so much more beautifully than I could ever imagine...this completely captivated my mind and left me speechless. From the pen of your muse ~ flows visions of mesmerizing and breathtaking beauty. (...and yet, nothing less is expected coming from the heart of someone so vastly overflowing with love, compassion, and incredible talent) ~*~smiles~*~ You are amazing, my friend! Hugs and much love to you, always, ~*~dawn~*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh Dawn ~ That was pretty, almost a poem, and considering your poetry, and your muse, I shall take it as a "little" compliment. Smile, someone loves you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am but her conduit, as she pens my very soul, =========================== with a muse as grand as yours...thats no small feat... this is so lovely Sharon...your writing is so varied and your imagery so creative ... You and Marge...and those endless muses.. Beautiful write poetess Mysteria jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
beautifully done.... I started to pick out lines I liked best..and decided it all was woven together so strongly to chose any one or series of lines.... very nice... very nice indeed. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice, Sharon, and a lovely picture Kathleen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Janet Marie - I too am a Gemini! Someone once in school in an English class (a teacher) told me the same thing, and she actually watched me she said to try to figure out how I could 'bounce all over the place". I hate to tell you this, but so do you Your writing is not only lst class, but quite varied, but one can not see that themselves. CPhat Hair ~ Why thank you, as I respect your writing so much. Irish Rose ~ Thank you and feel free anytime to take any graphics, that is what they are there for to be shared. |
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