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Open Poetry #16

Dandelion (for serenity)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-27 07:30 AM

Dandelion (for serenity)

snowball seeds freed
by papered wind
the ink of you
so surely penned

you remind me
of a dandelion
as words become
your very Zion

seeds you spread
to barren ground floor
take hold to echo
your mighty roar

don’t question the dreams
that you keep
your truest strengths
are rooted so deep

and don’t you ever
have a doubt
(you are a herb)
no world can
weed you out

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 09-27-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-09-27 08:59 AM

Perhaps it's all I'll ever be--
a flower wild, growing free,
(oh someone make a wish on me)
and on the breeze I'll take my leave...

Helen, it's so sweet of you to think of me, when I know that you have worries of your own. Hugs and gratitude, and I'm okay, okay?
Dream sweet, and I will talk to you later.

and THANK YOU.

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2001-09-27 10:12 AM

Ahhhhhhhh, this is so sweet, serenity, you truly are lucky to be wrote upon like this . Beutiful poem .
L.of.L. Tom .

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-09-27 10:26 AM

You're right she is a dandy...the lion part I'm not so sure of...she's more like a dandycat....

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