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Open Poetry #16

Once again

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-09-26 09:00 PM

Silencing my soul
for a moment
Full of sorrow
I think of you
Who do you love
and how?
Do you remember me
when she steals my kiss?
This torment
that is forever mine
doesn't let me live
My escape
is in my passion
where I dream you
once again

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-09-26 09:31 PM

I can so relate to this.

This torment
that is forever mine
doesn't let me live

Lovely poem

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-09-26 09:34 PM

Wow - precisely expressed with such deep feeling, I relate so much, it hurts to read this~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

3 posted 2001-09-30 10:47 PM

nice write...especially liked:

Do you remember me
when she steals my kiss?

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-10-01 02:03 AM

My escape
is in my passion
where I dream you
once again

my rest
is in my waking
where I love you
once again

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