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Open Poetry #16

The Vacant Site

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-09-26 06:16 PM

The Vacant Site

Camp struck,
But for the occasional remark
As though a thought tossed back
To douse the fire.
Yet,
As night falls and stars come out,
Within a corner
Dark sky seems to project
That warmth still tents.

RMW

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

1 posted 2001-09-26 06:24 PM

Bob...Yes, warmth still tents!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-09-26 07:40 PM

indeed. . .

well done my friend. . .

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-09-27 08:57 AM

...and the owl flies...

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2001-09-27 10:50 AM

Brilliant, sounds like Campfire time . Have a marshmellow for me . Lovely poem, short yet a very good read .
Thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-09-27 10:56 AM

RMW,
Enjoyed

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