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Open Poetry #16

Pleasure, Most Pure

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-11-15 02:40 AM

Laughter most sweet from a languished tounge
that rivials a mouth curved upward in a
mischevious way, were it not for a tear
that drops silently from hazel eyes.
Does not this violence on beauty make
one ask whom does God forsake for his pleasure?
Or is it nothing that we find when at last
we kiss and purity is lost amongst the vines.
Thorns do attack my soul, shreding a heart
that once followed its own way only
to have the sun look upon it as a
child that was forgetfull for his mistakes.
Then with your gentle laugh do come,
take my trembling hand, comfort may it be,
task me to make a daring try at resolve
so we may clear the dust and finnally wake.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-15 12:47 PM

This is lovely verse

Kathleen
(Kay)

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2001-11-15 02:38 PM

good to see you posting again!
Love,
marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-11-16 02:24 AM

This was a very good read!!!!

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

4 posted 2001-11-20 10:24 PM

MG
That was a very emotional read.......Beautiful and touching......Your words always leave me speechless.....
A nice way to end my evening.......
Jenn E

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