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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-11-13 11:50 PM




~*What is This?*~
AMK
Nov 13, 2001

What is this feeling I feel
Deep inside my heart
When did this all begin
From where did it start?

I am a bundle of nerves around you
My knees go weak, and my heart begins to race
Is it love that I feel, or mere attraction?
Powerful and strong, whichever the case

I sometimes feel myself blush
If you were here, I’d probably look away
Part of me wishes you’d just go
A bigger part of me wants you to stay

But don’t worry
This time, I will not disappear
I promise I won’t leave you
You have nothing to fear

I’m not sure where this is going
Or what exactly this even is
All I know is late at night
I see your face and think of your kiss

I ask myself all the time
What would I do if you were in front of me?
How would I feel if we touched?
I’m not scared anymore, I want you…can’t you see?

I want to take this slow
See where it may lead you and I
Just please know
I will not say Goodbye

You thought you lost me before
But I am still here right next to you
I tremble when I hear your voice
Now what do we do?




"Just because someone
doesn't love you the way you
want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you
with all they have."

[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-14 12:15 PM


Aimster,
I could offer several suggestions...but I'm sure you'll think of something without that passion flowing!   Good Luck!

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-11-14 01:20 AM


me thinks its LOVE  
your asking all the right questions Amy-girl.
and I LOVE that new signature too.
Better days girlie....we are ALL DUE  
heart-hugs
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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3 posted 2001-11-14 01:16 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, I know just how you feel; I always am thinking what would I do if my love was before my eyes, and how I should react, and could only imagine what my first kiss would ever be like, so when she does come I can hopefully have someone to love. (sigh) This is so compassionate and ouching, sweet friend, you are always soooooooo romantic and loving in your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-14 07:09 PM


you move forward. . . and enjoy. . .

wonderful Amy. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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