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Open Poetry #16

The Rhymester

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2001-11-13 08:10 PM

The Rhymester

You leave impressions
on my pages,
embossing your name
surreptitiously
upon my spine;
a subplot
folded into the envelope rhyme
of a love poem,
not unlike
the Byron
read in my bed.

If you must draw an analogy,
paint me as the tempest
of your dreams.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey

[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 11-13-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-13 09:46 PM

GOD, this is virtual poetry!!!!!

Corinne, you've outdone yourself!!!!!!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-13 10:37 PM

oh, "the tempest of your dreams. . . "

that line I like. . . a great visual. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-13 10:57 PM

(smiles) Oh Corrine, you are always so special to us all, for your beautiful inspiring words always tempt us with inspirations as do the love you share to us all! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2001-11-14 04:13 PM

Thank you kindly, Kathleen, Sven and Noah!

Corinne

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