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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-11-13 06:31 AM


A Temporary Folder

Shall this be the end
Or once more begin
A temporary folder
I have put myself in

Nothing is definite
My  mind debates
A temporary folder
Where one hesitates

Another installment
I shall wait and see
A temporary folder
Placing parts of me

Sometimes its fear
It takes hold inside
A temporary folder
Where I can decide

If and when hurting
The need to repair
A temporary folder
Gathers my despair

Be of continuation
Or rip pages apart
A temporary folder
It enfolds my heart

Making a decision
My ink not yet dry
A temporary folder
Will it be goodbye


Hope ©2001


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-11-13 06:46 AM


I have a folder like this at the office, and now see it in a new light ... transposed to my life. Very much enjoyed this concept Hope. You've captured the moments of "inbetween" and "hesitation" beautifully, very nicely written.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 11-13-2001).]

HopeS
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2 posted 2001-11-13 09:45 AM


Thanks Kit for your understanding reply
yes these are my thoughts , they pop in and out , sometime I am confident , other times I doubt, often scribbling down notes does help
Hope

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