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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I find The pieces come together when I’m Behind The clouds and stormy weather So I Rewind To see if things were better long ago I still don’t know And I’m Falling More and more in Love with Your not Calling Please tell my why your last resort is Walling Up your heart so it won’t break again I’m still a friend But I Just can’t let you go And I just thought that you should know That my love may speed up and slow But its still here It’s always here And your Sliding Further from my fingers Why keep Hiding As long as your love lingers I’ll be Riding Out our memories until they fade My choice is made But I Just cant watch you leave I’ll wear my heart out on my sleeve Until I can make you believe That we're for real I know you feel Our love is real |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you sweet thing, this is precious! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Kevin, Such a sad but beautiful write.Keep holding onto what you believe.May it take you where you want to go. Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, this could be set to music, it has a lyrical quality and flow. Very well penned, Kevin. A caring, giving heart shines through in your poetry. Thanks for sharing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is extremely well written. Loved the presentation as well. Enjoyed! Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem sings with beautiful music. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiCutiePie~ So good to see you ... as always~  'And I’m Falling More and more in Love with Your not Calling Please tell me why your last resort is Walling Up your heart so it won’t break again I’m still a friend' 'I’ll be Riding Out our memories until they fade My choice is made' I feel a very determined ache in this write ... BIG hugs, my friend~  ~*PoeticMom*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes your heart is definately out on your sleeve...hope that she appreciates your love...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kevin, "And your Sliding Further from my fingers Why keep Hiding As long as your love lingers I’ll be Riding Out our memories until they fade My choice is made..." I love that part.. "Riding our memories until they fade.." Just wonderful! I'm so glad I stopped in to read Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
This is a song my first actuallyhehe Im glad it reads that way |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Oh yeah this is wonderful. It's so sweet, and graceful. I can't wait for the album to come out! Sheesh, you really expressed exactly what is in my heart today, with words I certainly couldn't find. Good job! Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Oh yeah this is wonderful. It's so sweet, and graceful. I can't wait for the album to come out! Sheesh, you really expressed exactly what is in my heart today, with words I certainly couldn't find. Good job! Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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