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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-11-12 10:06 PM


Supposed
I write
until
my pen dies
How many words
would I write
How many hours
How many days
Supposed I don't
write
a word
Then nothing
would be said
about you.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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1 posted 2001-11-12 10:09 PM


whoah!         

[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-12-2001).]

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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2 posted 2001-11-12 10:11 PM


Ooh, power emits from such a small place.  Fabulous work, walker.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-11-12 10:19 PM


Walker...that statement speaks volumes..
Nicely said....kick em again.....

peaches73533
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4 posted 2001-11-12 10:26 PM


So powerful and so few words.Wow.
Peaches

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-11-12 10:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Walker, it's so wonderful to always read your lovely words; I love them all! (big hugggsssssss) Keep writing, everything you write is soooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2001-11-12 11:10 PM


Way to go, Walker! Leave him stuck on the eraser.
Duncan
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7 posted 2001-11-13 01:41 AM


Damn, walker.  This is incredible.  Different somehow from your usual write.  Very focused.  New walker favorite.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8 posted 2001-11-13 08:48 AM




Wonderful...powerful write..

I quiet enjoyed it...

Thank you
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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
9 posted 2001-11-13 09:23 AM


*grin* now you just go and get another pen and keep writing because we want to hear more. I am so glad to start my day reading your poems. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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