Open Poetry #16 |
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A Symphony Of Desire |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Ever enlivened, my passions freely boil. I listened, shuddered, my soul screamed.. My voice trembled so, my tongue of it’s own. My outreached hands grasped to touch.. A yearning sigh swept through my ears as I beheld an image beyond creation. Into my spirit a melody was formed. A song of love, pure devotion escaped my lips. A tear streamed from my face as I sang. True feelings felt, expressed.... flowed pure. Shaking so, clinging to the moment. Praying that I could recall each word. You enmeshed me with your thoughts. Though I too knew them, I listened. An eloquence of a dozen angel’s harps quelling my fears, doubt, caressing my soul. I pine of you beneath stars my beloved. Though you are part of me, I squirm. Your presence, so consuming, warms me. Oh...can I ever relinquish you for a moment. For the hourglass of my mind drains slowly. Sing a song with me as my heart does grow. A song of shared love, measured desires. Of potent thoughts entwined each night. For....this instant ...a symphony of hunger... awaits you. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
you're boiling? ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well geee...at my age...could that be possible? Thanx Kay...I think? |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I agree with Shallot you are boiling.And in my opinion you may boil at any age.So boil away,Magnus. Peaches ![]() |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
A symphony of hunger...awaits you. simply....sigh............. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH MAGNUS! You orchestrate a symphony of sighs from the ladies of PiP!! AND...You have come to a boil sir! ![]() Hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* musical enchantment to start my day. This sings with a love that flows gently on the heart. BRAVO!!!!Absolutely perfect. I love every word and note. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You write well, I enjoyed the read. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very enjoyable reading to start the day.(or end it for that matter) Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Peaches...and yes, even this tired heart can boil within my mind....even over- flow if I am not careful.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A sigh? ooooo, me thinks you must have enjoyed this....Thanx Whispers... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy....oh yes in deedee....this watched pot does certainly boil....thanx. |
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