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Sweet November
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Sweet November |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
"I wish that I could say (of your leaving) that I'm going to feel so bad, but I cannot miss, the love I'd never had..." One word made it clear though I'd always known still hoping the impossible weaved, sown into the unthinkable you with me vice versa no... closed eyes see nothing cold hearts give nothing one recieves what one gives... so therefore, I'd reaped nothing, from you... For true love stood before me proud, bending with me aching but standing still here, so I celebrate the 15th of November with gratitude & no regrets... ~Tier 11/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Sounds like a heartbreaking expression of sour lost love! (big hugggssssss) Oh R.T, I hope this isn't based upon one of your recent feelings, but if it is, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) So sad but wonderfully expressed, sweet friend! (big huggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been told that writers want to read more than a wow but darn if that doesn't express it all... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Noah and Sunshine... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a love never found. . . or. . . a love still wished for? one wonders. . . and one knows. . . it's all here. . . well done my friend. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tier~WOW!! There I said it! Amazing write my friend... a lot going on between the lines here. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
WOW Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I really like this one. "Tears from Tiers." November really can bring quite a chill. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
One word made it clear though I'd always known still hoping the impossible weaved, sown into the unthinkable you with me vice versa no... In all honesty, had trouble connecting the first verse to the last. Perhaps, just me or the hour. Very much related to the whole.....in different ways and levels. Enjoyed as always, Tier. |
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