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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-12 01:58 PM

I watched a young couple, early twenties, stepping lively across the way.
Talking, smiling, exuberant, not a single care seemingly spoiling their day.

They kept step to a silent tune, a generation gap my ear did not get.
Walking lightly, skipping slightly, two lovers you can certainly bet

I think about the days ago when we were like  they and then
I think about the ways ago when we were lively, sleek  and thin.

I dream of the moments when we thought rabbits could not compare.
I remember the second when she came blushing after killing the doctor’s hare.

I don’t have a memory of the night when my first child was born
Sadly,   I was not there to be seen, my heart and feelings truly torn.

I will tell you all this feeling from the bottom of my war torn heart.
I can reassure my children now that I have dearly  loved them from the start.

Tim, Ash......I love you.....
                                          Lou......thank you for killing the hare.....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-12 02:02 PM

and not once, but twice...

a smile graces this poem...thank you for sharing....

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2001-11-12 02:41 PM

I could feel your words... a sign of a work well written. Thanks for sharing. Peace.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-12 03:08 PM

(sigh) Poor hare! (sigh) Oh Magnus, this is sooooooooo beautiful, your sweet Timothy and Ashley will always love you as they grow and become the most lovely people they are born to be! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-11-12 03:16 PM

Magnus,
A nice write, enjoyed

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-13 03:44 PM

*giggling* now this creates a wonderful vision. Very well done. I am so glad the rabbit died for you both too. *grin*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2001-11-13 09:09 PM

Magnus,
The rabbit died for a worthy cause to be sure! Cute write.

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