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Robert William Gruhn
Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-11 11:53 PM

No rules in dreams
Smiling with a frown
Frowning with a smile
Upside down and backwards

Running red changing lights
Shades of green stops
No rhyme or reason
Doing as you wish

Wishing you had done
Opposite of blue yesterday
Controlling things that end
Living in sleepy cocoon

Wrapped up in nothing
Still you belong there
Visions of sweetness wanted
Yet leaving you everytime

Caressed by unknown love
Becoming what you desire
Will she return again
Does it really matter

Can't hold her anyway
Lovely dream turned nightmare
Giving less than cruelty
Despised by me again

Then falling without body
Frightened but no pain
More hurt when eyes open
Awakened to living reality

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-11-12 12:02 PM

Robert,
There you are. I have heard so much about you, sir! But this is a fine introduction. Fine job I must say.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-11-12 05:01 AM

yeesh, sounds like some of my dreams. poems can be so criptic at times... is this about the loss of a relative or perhaps someone even closer through death? do tell, because i love understanding what i've read with clarity, no better person to ask than the author. enjoyed the flow and imagery, however.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-11-12 08:29 AM

Hi Robert, you have captured the dream state very well. Much enjoyed.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-12 08:44 AM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Robert, I couldn't help but cry reading this poem, for I know these feelings ever too well, and I want ever so much to fall in love, and I feel no one would ever want a strange sad sparrow in their embrace. (sad sigh) I know these bitter feelings ever so well, and deep down I believe you will again wake up from a dream with love by your side. (big hugggsssss) You deserve the greatest love you could ever wish for, sweet friend, I have faith in you! (sigh) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

5 posted 2001-11-12 08:45 AM

This is great!

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