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Hollow Eyes |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Hollow Eyes forgive me, I looked at you through hollow eyes then my own world exploded from fire raining skies it was not that I did not care but my home is so far away from there I felt your pain but it didn’t touch me now hollow eyes can tear filled see I know now the terror you wear upon your face and pray your prayer of saving grace our world is vast but it is just one joined arms are strong enough to hold everyone no matter sex, land, color nor creed when one hurts we all bleed ** written on exploring my thoughts of seeing pictures before of other countries ravaged by terrorism** "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Powerfully penned, Helen and so very true! Hugs  Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Oh my God, this is one of the best poems I have ever read, this is so strong and beutiful, God I wish I could write like that . I bow to you and your poem writting prowess . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The world only gets smaller making a distant ignorance near impossible anymore. Enjoyed |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good..... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. Enjoyed reading it. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now we understand. Thank you for speaking for many. |
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