These feelings I have, I have not?

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-11 10:18 PM

What is it with these feelings that I have?
Is it  that I should, or that I should not?
Are feelings just something that come, go?
Or...are they within us, growing eternal.

You say you cherish me, I feel great joy.
You write of how you crave me, I yearn.
You caress my ears with delicate sighs
I become mush, a bowl of soft goo.

Have I not felt this way in our lifetime?
Am I mad to experience love overwhelming?
Will I know that this remains,  is real, is it?
Can this soul love now as it never has before?

Leaving you is beyond mental comprehension.
Your shadow, beside me,  is now part of my own.
I walk a trusted path of love with and for you.
Our journey will take us far, beyond starlight.

I dream of rides into the heavens,  with you.
Your warmth resting against me as we fly.
Our wings will steadily carry us into ecstasy.
Our souls will within us, go into eternal life.

Though I have held you innumerable times
each is as tender as the very first we shared.
My lips, upon touching yours, quench me.
Our hands connected, have taken us to bliss.

I will lie with you as you sleep in comfort.
You, knowing that I will ever be present..
Your eyes will first see mine as you arise.
For I have a macrocosm of love to share.
And you my dear, my love I award to you.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-11 10:21 PM

what you have is what you don't have. . .but yet, is it what you want??

does it matter?? I would say that this award should be worn proudly. . . you tell of these feelings well here my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-11-11 10:23 PM

*sigh* I love it when you write about your wife like this. *sigh* This is the way I want a man to feel about me. Now come on, Magnus, go get yourself cloned. There are women out here that need men like you. LOL All kidding aside, the love you have for your wife is inspiring and gives hope. I LOVE IT!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-11 10:35 PM

This is beautiful indeed. Yes, everyone should get to experience a love like this. Wonderful thoughts, wonderful writing Magnus

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-11 10:44 PM

*sigh* Oh Magnus!! As always....I swoon.
The 'King of Romance' strikes again!
Lucky wife...Lucky you...Lucky two!
Great write my friend.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-11-11 10:48 PM

"I will lie with you as you sleep in comfort.
You, knowing that I will ever be present..
Your eyes will first see mine as you arise.
For I have a macrocosm of love to share.
And you my dear, my love I award to you."

Simply lovely write, Magnus. This is what love is all about. Sigh . . .

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2001-11-11 11:23 PM

This is a beautiful write Magnus.You've outdone yourself once again.

You have the heart and soul of a true poet.
Peaches

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