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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-11 06:04 PM


Would love fill me
First time seeing you
Would our eyes melt
Slowly into each others

Falling sweetly in love
Never again to return
Finding this living paradise
Our spirits forever entwined



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1 posted 2001-11-11 06:08 PM


*sigh* such a romantic question. I guess you never know until you meet. I often dream about melting into someones arms. I love this poem, Sir Robert. *grin* maybe I should post the poem that will explain to everyone here why I call you that, dear knight. I will think on it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-11 06:09 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Robert! Your sweet words will indeed have many beautiful women falling to their knes, and the lucky one will forever love you! (sigh) I believe in this for you, sweet Robert! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-11 10:56 PM


Ah, lovely. Beautiful poem. I feel these words you have written so tenderly. (And I think Karen should post the poem she's talking about, I want to see it!!!)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2001-11-12 12:06 PM


Sir Robert,
I may have to request some lessons. 'Cause you have your tender side going pretty good here. And while I'm a tender guy it isn't coming out in poetry all that well.  

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5 posted 2001-11-12 01:21 PM



Enjoying your penmanship....

Well done, Sir!

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