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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Surprise New furniture stood on display Dark and somber heavy in weigh Tilting the room in awkward feel It had no life of or sex appeal. She brooded for at least an hour It was missing esthetic power She hung one of my pictures back The room did light but still it lack. Up went one more then another She asked more and more to cover A light sprang back into her eyes The room was warm to her surprise. Said your pictures are like helium They lift the dark away the glum I did not know till they were gone How much of me they set upon. Without them it would never do I guess they are apart of you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She hung one of my pictures back The room did light but still it lack. Up went one more then another She asked more and more to cover A light sprang back into her eyes The room was warm to her surprise. Said your pictures are like helium They lift the dark away the glum I did not know till they were gone How much of me they set upon. Without them it would never do I guess they are apart of you =================================== YES!!!!!!!!           how could she not  I just love surprises and happy endings Stinky  *WW* me You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. In the sunlight, in the shadows ... No ... I'll never stop looking for you. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as in these forums, so like your rooms your words lift hearts, dispel all gloom so like your art, shall you place your thoughts so poets may read, that which is wrought In Sunday morning's great surprise I see the twinkle in your eyes... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! May all your pictures hang again and light the room with the romance and feel of wonder! (smiles) I know how you feel, and I hope all those paintings find a special place! (big huggsssssss) You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
That reminds me.. I need to get some beanbag chairs down here.. thanks for the reminder Seymor! good poem! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh well done. I can feel the pleasure in your words. time for a party.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yaaayyyy!!! On the wall again!!! So glad to hear this...then I would think your art would be warmth anywhere. Hugs! Sincerely, Rwood It's all in the mind |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is little doubt you are an artist, Sy...in many ways |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yaaaay. You got your pictures back!!! Pictures do add so much warmth to a room. I have tons of framed prints around my house, and I love each and every last one of them, and can tell you where they all came from. I wish I could paint my own, but, alas, that talent escapes me. I do so admire those who can though If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My dear friends, since I am so tired of moving furniture and hanging pictures I can only thank you as a group. You are as dear to me as my poems and paintings. And I thank you all for being part of my life. *L* |
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