Open Poetry #16 |
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Summertime Breezes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The lace curtain that hangs by the window Billows gracefully in the warm Summer breeze As we lay here beside one another With you I feel so very much at ease The subtle scent of gardenia So heavenly is its perfume A cloud of this beautiful fragrance Floats through the air around the room My gaze begins to linger On your face that's so divine In this early morning sunlight How your brilliant blue eyes shine The aroma of freshly brewed coffee With eggs and bacon I've made for two On the balcony you and I will sit As we admire the spectacular view From here we look out over the ocean As far as the eye can see There is certainly no better place You and I could possibly be We'll walk hand in hand by the water As the sun melts slowly over the sea I'll succumb to your charms under the moonlight As towards heaven your love will transport me Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) There's nothing like a nice walk on the beach, holding the hand of the one you love, in the morning at sunrise, kissing against the bright sun. (big hugggsssss) You are such a sweet romantic, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
very excellent expression of a love so strong....BTW...I like to cook like that too...just don't have the view.. Also...please send me one of the poems that you sent before...I accidently deleted them....sorry. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
awww that one was REALLY good.. sounds like you have a nice place.. a good view.. by the shore.. thats ALL YOU NEED!!! |
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