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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-10 03:49 PM




I Love You
By: Noah Eaton
11/10/01

I quiver, as our love for each other Ignites

Losing myself in your arms, all my yearnings Lull
Of the many goddesses I worship, you're the most beautiful One
Velvet words quicken my heart, yours throb so Vividly
Every one of my dreams come true, as we breathe together Easily

You are my one true love, my heart will forever be Yours
Open your eyes, shed a little crystal tear, turn my heart On
Until death do us part, I will always love you, sharing Utopia


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2001-11-10 04:18 PM


Noah
Your words were truly beautiful and captured the epitome of romance.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2001-11-10 04:59 PM


Noah, yes, these are the kinds of thoughts I love hearing and so good to see you smiling!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-11-10 05:11 PM


Nice pic Noah...and a nice poem...like
the way you put I LOVE YOU at the end
of the poem as part of each line...

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4 posted 2001-11-10 06:07 PM


Noah,

    I have not been able to do this yet..a  double acronym. (I think that is how you spell it *chuckles*) You make it look soooo easy Wonderful job!

Hugs,
Tara

Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-10 06:09 PM


Very well done, Noah. Good to see you too.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Wanda
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6 posted 2001-11-10 07:10 PM


Noah; Very nicely done.  I am glad you put your photo on display.  Wanda
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7 posted 2001-11-10 10:52 PM


Another lovely poem of love and romance from your pen Noah. And so nice to finally be able to see what you look like.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2001-11-10 11:00 PM


Hi Honey! (Hugs) I love your poem, and I love you! You just blow my mind with your sincere, sweet, romantic, caring words!
You are so cute I just want to squeeze you.
Oh wow Noah, this is my 500th post! I'm glad it is going to you! (((( tight huggggsssss)))

Love,
RP

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9 posted 2001-11-10 11:36 PM


Simply beautiful...what a way with words you have! So much enjoyed and you also have a sweet heart.  

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Domzi
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10 posted 2001-11-11 02:12 AM


Wow! Your use of words describing romance just blow my mind. Keep the lovely thoughts flowing onto the pages.

Do or die!

peaches73533
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11 posted 2001-11-12 10:18 PM


Wow. Your words continue to touch my heart.
Peaches

walker
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12 posted 2001-11-12 10:23 PM


This is very romantic and poetic. Great expression of love.
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