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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-11-10 08:43 AM





Day is over, life is fed
All is quiet, time for bed
So we climb the magic stairway to ‘Our’ place...
Only candles we allow
as we whisper love’s sweet vow
Kisses softly shared within a warm embrace...

You Are Me, and I Am You
We share souls as lovers do
To be forever bonded, night or day...
Love has spun her web, it seems
in our bed of hopes and dreams,
as echoes of our music softly plays...

And no matter what’s outside,
under cover, laugh and hide
Into each other’s arms we both can run...
Life continues, let it be
In the end the world will see
You Are Me, I Am You,
We Are One...


The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 11-10-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-10 09:00 AM



Great line...life is fed...

lovely poem!

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-11-10 09:04 AM


Sunnyone,

   This is what everyone wants to find.  That one person you can run away and hide with, and know everything will be ok as long as they're together. Wonderful write, greatly enjoyed.

   And I have to agree... life is fed.. great line.

Hugs,
Tara

RSWells
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3 posted 2001-11-10 11:30 AM


Safest place on earth when all is right. Goodnight.
ctowen
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4 posted 2001-11-10 11:35 AM


And a magnificent one it is!!
Well said, and shared.
Truly enjoyed this,
a very everlasting thought
for my mind today.
Thanks!!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-11-10 11:54 AM


Sunnyone,
Liked the form, liked the poem. *L*

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-11-10 12:38 PM


what a lovely, delicate poem!  Peaceful like, too....

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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Gaia
7 posted 2001-11-10 01:11 PM


Hello in sunny (?) England! In case you miss Alaska, it's 9 AM and the sun is just now trying to peek over the edge of the horizon...as if you didn't already know that. Haha. Don't forget to sit by the Thames and read and write some poetry. And of course, sing, sing, sing.
Sounds like a nice cozy retreat you have there.

EagleScorpion
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8 posted 2001-11-10 02:33 PM


I long for this peace in life you have.. many do not have it yet, and many never will. Gob bless you.. you are very lucky

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2001-11-10 02:37 PM




(sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet Sunny! I love it! May your heart forever melt with his as one in the beauty of true love! (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunny, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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