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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-11-10 03:21 AM

Onyx The Dragon

Black as the moonless night
silent in dreamless sleep
I rise my sleepy head
my hunger makes me weep

Drawn to here from unknown
a place frequently lost
my weatheredly scaled skin
defeating nights cold frost

I bathe in burning stars
I pillage, I plunder
thy fathers heritage
puts me six feet under

I, Onyx the dragon
must face even my fears
the forgotten hunger
hidden for all these years

Such is the light of day
and visions of true love
both make me run and hide
soaring the heavens above

But time now grows weary
from lies of distant past
this dragonhearted lore
may never really last

Before the stars find sleep
and my eyes face the dawn
I hope to share my dreams
before I must be gone

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2001-11-10 05:27 AM

Quite rare
from the dragons point of view
Thank you
Arthur

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2001-11-10 10:58 AM

Thank you ... I found myself in a restless sleep, and with all the posts of castles and knights this seemed appropriate.
Under the midnitesun I felt a bit "cagey".
Its fitting that you sir, Arthur of Passions table, be the first to comment.
Much appreciated!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-10 03:38 PM

And even more I add to this...me...one of
the castle writers...and a Dragon Slayer
story teller....

Nicely written....I could see the dragon,
feel his thoughts...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-10 04:34 PM

(big hugggssssss) Such dragonlore and wonder fills your marvelous words, dearest Craig! (sigh) May all your dreams and love shine to us all always! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-10 07:02 PM

STANDING OVATION!!!

I LOVE DRAGONS!!!This poem opened up his heart and soul to us. BRAVO!! I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-11-10 09:51 PM

Thank you for taking me back to the days of dragons, knights and fairytales. My favourite place to be. This dragon really seems to have a lot on his mind doesn't he? I really enjoyed this CT. Great writing.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-10 10:00 PM

Wonderful write!! I love seeing it from the dragon's viewpoint. Very original!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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