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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
from the deep recesses of my soul there is a voice that is not told for it lurks there in the night waiting for the chance to take it's flight the darkness that surrounds me like a prison that won't set me free my dreams become filled with pain my pillow with tears is now fully stained as dawn approaches something says no and of this darkness I just let go waking in a ragged breath thankful that there is no death in the morning I realize this one more time death has missed and so each night I will forever fight for I know I'm not ready to take that flight Peaches |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done, Peaches. I'm glad you're not ready to take that flight. Stay around here, ok?  *hugs*God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Elizabeth,I will and thanks.  Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Stick around awhile, we're just getting to know you. There are so many wonderful friends in this big family, you'll never have to worry about being alone, and there will always be ears for listening. Not to mention hugs and laughter. Oh, yah...there's plenty of laughter and playing in here too. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Good to have found this at the appropriate hour. Like what you have done. You have caught the dark foreboding . . . |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
yes the dark fight of the soul comes in the night Arthur |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Peaches, I'm so happy you're not making that flight, for we all love you so much and it is so wonderful to live! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches....WOW...need I say more... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great, I really enjoyed it! Well Done. Maree |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Midnitesun:thank you.I think I will stay fro awhile. Krawdad:Glad you enjoyed it. Arthur:Yes it does but we are strong and we will survive the night. Noah:Thanks so much. Magnus:Thanks,it means a lot to me.You have inspired me so much through your writing.I haven't written this much since high school. DarkAngel:Glad you enjoyed it Peaches |
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