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And From the Files...1 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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And From the Files...1 The weekend is here, the chill has set in, forcing a furnaced heat to rise and cling, hopefully to warm my thoughts for tomorrow, as today has been of lost cause. *~* Recapturing the past, I file through titles trailing thoughts of unfolding and waiting, wondering...what is love? White lies ahead, in yesterdays find, the true colors surrendering somewhere into tomorrow. I don't have to look far to find the feelings, the sustenance needed day after day, held between lines. As I fight the fight in anger, I cherish my mourning of kisses, the fragments of time and emotional ties that are for only you. I have tried to explain I am not a fairy tale... although in the mist of dreams, I touch this life in silent truth of simple love. All I have to share is a smile from these lips, that fringed on heart-words, waiting with promises that were never enough because ... they were just thoughts spacing by. The attraction of you spellbound me to YOU-thoughts, left me naked in today's tomorrows. Is it worth wondering why I treasure keep, replacing the actual bitter taste with a seasoned echo of the night? I'm guilty, losing that feeling in morning fog, beveled thoughts wasting words, a picture framing my life frozen in want, motionless, cold...loneliness, mirroring the old. ~Wynter *~* made from words of titles of the last few months poems of mine. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) I know just how you feel, and I pray with all my heart you will find love to replace the loneliness in your loving heart! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wynter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wynter~Very well done and quite a unique idea! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wynter...I wish my mind's dictionary had as many words and expressions in it....nicely done... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
incredible! I loved this, then you told how you did it, and that makes it even cooler! excellent!!  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Nicely done, well put!! I see the moment has not come to reveal your tomorrows ..., I wish you a swift and happy response soon. Be well, your "will" is not yet taken!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
left naked in todays tomarrows ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ what a wonderful line... as are most of them in this write.... beautiful ~Connie~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a very emotional write for you I imagine. Very sad and very reflective. Kathleen |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Clever is your middle name! It gives me inspiration to try one of my own, to get my pen moving again Music, tonal clear & pure, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
what a unique way to kick the muse into action...very well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah...I am no longer looking for love...but thank you...this was an exercise in using the titles of the past two months of my poems...just to see if they would make sense. *S Nancy~thank you..not too unique..but interesting how my titles all fell into an easy sequence *s Magnus..that was a nice thing to write..thank you..made my evening SEA ..glad you enjoyed it. I think others have used titles before..*s ctowen...thank you ...I think my moments are done now..but I can live with it. You are too cute..my "will" is pretty much gone now...I see you recall my other poem..thank you. Connie...that line was from another of my poems and titles thank you for reading.e... as are most of them in this write.... beautiful Kay...Well everything I write is emotional..so I have been told *s And yes, this one was reflective. chansondegeste...Wynter Clever Bliss...doesn't have the same ring to it..does it..*s thanks Chanson...hugsssss Try one you may like it ..I think you have done so before elsewhere. Martie...yes sometimes I need to do that kick myself *s..it is a good way. I was just looking over my poems on my computer and thought the titles would fall into place easily so that's what I did. I really never lose my muse. It sometimes is too mean even for me to use.Thank you. *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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