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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-09 09:49 AM

~*~
the social mirror
tells you who you ought to be
please do not listen
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-11-09 09:50 AM

take me as I am
you'll get me no other way
look at me....I'm real

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2001-11-09 09:57 AM

I can only be
The person that I am now
Take me as I am

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-11-09 09:58 AM

believing in self
Individuality
freedom to be me

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-11-09 10:02 AM

the silver mirror
reflecting the outer me
reversed in looking

Gloom

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

5 posted 2001-11-09 10:17 AM

Loper, I LOVE THIS.....
Cna not even begin to say how much.....

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

6 posted 2001-11-09 10:30 AM

         for as I look inside of me
         I see the woman I'm aspring to be
         what you see is what is there
         in all the faults and goodness
         is what I have to share

Good writng.right to the point.
Peaches

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-11-09 10:37 AM

poignantly point made
check, mate, game, players all be
looking for windmills

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-11-09 10:37 AM

just be ourselves, through our words, that's all,.....just us......

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-11-09 11:19 AM

I speak
but the words escape your lips
you smile
yet laughter flows through me
you mirror my movements
or is it I that mirror you?

~Nancy~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2001-11-09 12:49 PM

I stopped looking at that mirror a long time ago, thank God.
An excellent write, as usual dear 'Loper.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2001-11-09 01:28 PM

Follow your dear heart
Never forget who you are
Loving and special

BRAVO!!! Your loving heart shines in this beautiful senryu! I LOVE IT!!! As long as we follow our hearts, we can achieve anything! BRAVO!!! I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2001-11-12 05:01 PM

So true...

~Tier

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-11-12 05:53 PM

I am more than what you see
my reflection on the mirror
is not all of me....
A Wonderful truthful piece......

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2001-11-12 06:56 PM

always listen to you...and your mirror...

Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2001-11-12 08:16 PM

Good points made by everyone, so I will just say..I like it.
Sandra

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2001-11-12 11:04 PM

I look into my mirror and see the person I want to be. This poem is absolutely wonderful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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